The whole thing is brilliant, and we need to start talking about both of these!
I have just one concern.

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The 14th Amendment is modified to read:
All persons born of two citizens or lawful permanent residents of the United States...
nor shall any State deprive any person of life, liberty, or property, without due process of law; nor deny to any person citizen or lawful resident within its jurisdiction the equal protection of the laws."

(Emphases mine)

That "born of" would have to be changed to "conceived by," in my opinion. Otherwise, the current abortion regime -- which is the deprivation of millions of people of their lives without due process of law -- would not only be allowed, but positively enshrined in the Constitution.